Category Archives: Fiction and Poetry

Lightness and Choice

Susan Gibb on Tereza

It is the control of the relationship that is the lightness or weightiness that is at question here for Tereza. The burden she claims to carry which weighs on her, that is, the knowledge of his infidelity and attitude towards love and lovemaking, may in fact be the opposite; the freedom of not having to make that decision. Yet she is about to test that theory as she flirts with the notion of indiscretions of her own.

Stanza Breaks

Jesse Abbot has a way with stanza breaks. This is from his September 23rd p.o.a.m.:

May the drunk sun of paradox rise

in churches that banish it to Limbo & its kind.
May some limbs in which we linger nights
be there to comfort grieving mums

of war by day, the tears deposited
as honest as proprietary lovers’ clues. (italics mine)

“grieving mums / of war by day” has a smooth set of jumps.

Land

This is odd, and oddly typical. Land in Hudspeth County can kill:

Driving down grown-over, washed out, rough roads that Sunset Ranches carved out of the desert, crumbling homes, half-built cinder block structures, weather beaten campers and recreational vehicles speckle the landscape.

Color Rich

This latest by Carianne is color rich and subtly dark, like something happening at night. It was worth two poems, although it was really a matter of being unable to pick between two poems that sort of tumbled out onto the canvas. It’s such a concentration that it provided opportunity to play with further compressive leaps.